Feedback/developing our idea

We pitched our idea to our idea in order to receive feedback. Firstly, it was suggested that we should remove the tea cup aspect of our idea as it contrasted with the seriousness of the subject matter. Therefore, our group came up with the idea of feeding the victim the poisonous substance through either a drip or through a funnel attached with duct tape. However, although we are no longer using a tea cup, we decided that we would stick with the idea of using berries to poison the woman as because they aren't as suspicious as pure poison, which is important given that the man would later attempt to cover his tracks in the film.

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We were also told that it would should come up with a more detailed background tory to explain why this murder occurs and how these characters are related to one another. It was suggested that the two characters could be brother and sister, who do not get along well with each other. After the death of the characters' father. The man murders his sister so that he receives all the family's inheritance money and could use it not only for his self but also to pay for his son's needs. However, in murdering his sister, he realises that he enjoyed the act of killing her and goes on to become a serial killer.  

                                              

We also received feedback on the location. It was suggested that a greenhouse would be an intriguing and visual setting for the opening sequence. Therefore, our group decided that we would like to film the opening sequence in the Beatrice Webb tea room. In this room, it would be possible to film a range of interesting shots, including one of the silhouette of the man.